Random Elements 1.1 · 12:24pm
Unless something absolutely unforseeable happens the finale of the sequel is going to be out by the end of this weekend at the very latest, so I've decided to give Random Elements one final polish before I close the door on this particular story.
Most of it was yet more grammar and typo fixes that were still lurking annoyingly in there, but there are a few new bits added too.
For those who don't want to read through the whole thing again they are;
*Removed the silly Ditsy Do cameo in chapter 2 along with expanding Inky's internal crisis a bit.
*Gilda gets some much needed closure in chapter 10 after her not very flattering original cameo.
*The Twilight and Fluttershy scene in chapter 11 has been bulked out to get into their respective heads a bit more.
I was originally planning to add a scene of Twilight telling the double's about how they brought back the sun in the regular Equestria before Spark's storm out that I've had in the back of my head since well before I finished the fic, but actually coming to write the scene it ended up as being pretty redundant. Still hopefully the new additions are an improvement and I hope you enjoy the Coincidences finale when it does come out.