The Immortal Game: Chapter 1 (Part 1) · 5:53am Oct 12th, 2013
Ooh, off to a good start. I'm digging the imagery here. Celestia enjoying a graceful sunset dive, then popping through the clouds into the middle of a battle? Love it. Very cinematic.
"earthponies"... please let that be a typo.
Ah, violence and death. Yes, it's a grimdark. It had better be REALLY good then, I normally like my pony stories death-free.
"Zenith"... she named her sword after an old electronics company.