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Latest Stories

  • T Not an Adult

    Twilight Sparkle has been living a lie. Everypony told her what a beautiful and accomplished mare she was. Everypony thought she was a responsible adult. They were wrong. She was still just a filly trying to stumble her way through life.  · Sapidus3
    4,178 words · 4,592 views  ·  661  ·  26
  • E Horn Marrow

    Shining Armor has been infected by a Changeling poison that threatens to destroy his magic or worse. When Twilight and her family are tested to see if they could be potential horn marrow donors, an old family secret is brought to life.  · Sapidus3
    4,062 words · 4,129 views  ·  485  ·  34
  • T One Night a Year

    One night a year, on the Eve of the Summer Sun Celebration, Princess Celestia is sad, at least according to Twilight's observations. She has a plan, a boardgame, and is determined to try to cheer up her mentor.  · Sapidus3
    4,996 words · 3,849 views  ·  619  ·  19 · sex
  • E Plus One

    Twilight is confused when she receives an invitation to a party that seems to assume she has a plus one already. Celestia is confused that Twilight is confused. They are dating, right?  · Sapidus3
    3,216 words · 5,751 views  ·  815  ·  38
  • E Mysterious and Metaphorical Meanings of Marks

    Victorious over the vicious villain, thoughtful Twilight is taught the true talents and metaphorical meanings of the marks of the pretty pony princess.  · Sapidus3
    1,057 words · 556 views  ·  72  ·  1
  • E Misunderstanding

    During what started as a perfectly fine Lunch, Twilight learns that her friends have somehow gotten it into their heads that she is in a relationship with her mentor and idol Princess Celestia.  · Sapidus3
    4,605 words · 8,902 views  ·  1,316  ·  35
  • T After the Fall

    Everyone is dead. She doesn't know who is responsible, just that somepony activated the ultimate weapon. Only four ponies survived and now try to find meaning in the great wasteland. Celestia will just be happy if she can find a way to heal Twilight.  · Sapidus3
    22,719 words · 1,682 views  ·  250  ·  7
  • T Diary One Hundred and Thirty Eight

    I know I'm not really her. Celestia is dead and gone. But I feel like I'm her, even though I'm not even a real pony. Twilight needs Celestia, so I will do my best to be Celestia. - An Equestria's Twilight Side Story -  · Sapidus3
    6,105 words · 362 views  ·  69  ·  2
  • T Influence

    After an innocent conversation, Shining Armor is feeling uneasy about his wife’s special talent and even more worried about something he learns regarding Princess Celestia. Luckily for him his sister is one of the most talented ponies in Equestria.  · Sapidus3
    6,580 words · 2,096 views  ·  219  ·  30
  • E Controlled Burn

    A wildfire is heading towards Ponyville, but luckily Twilight Sparkle has a plan.  · Sapidus3
    3,603 words · 523 views  ·  27  ·  2

Serious Sad/Dark Stories

  • Equestria's Twilight This is the story of the end. This is the story of the death of Equestria. by Sapidus3 140,052 words · 13,046 views · 1,007 likes · 23 dislikes
  • After the Fall Everyone is dead. She doesn't know who is responsible, just that somepony activated the ultimate weapon. Only four ponies survived and now try to find meaning in the great wasteland. Celestia will just be happy if she can find a way to heal Twilight. by Sapidus3 22,719 words · 1,682 views · 250 likes · 7 dislikes
  • Influence After an innocent conversation, Shining Armor is feeling uneasy about his wife’s special talent and even more worried about something he learns regarding Princess Celestia. Luckily for him his sister is one of the most talented ponies in Equestria. by Sapidus3 6,580 words · 2,096 views · 219 likes · 30 dislikes
  • Not an Adult Twilight Sparkle has been living a lie. Everypony told her what a beautiful and accomplished mare she was. Everypony thought she was a responsible adult. They were wrong. She was still just a filly trying to stumble her way through life. by Sapidus3 4,178 words · 4,592 views · 661 likes · 26 dislikes
  • Diary One Hundred and Thirty Eight I know I'm not really her. Celestia is dead and gone. But I feel like I'm her, even though I'm not even a real pony. Twilight needs Celestia, so I will do my best to be Celestia. - An Equestria's Twilight Side Story - by Sapidus3 6,105 words · 362 views · 69 likes · 2 dislikes

Comedies

  • Plus One Twilight is confused when she receives an invitation to a party that seems to assume she has a plus one already. Celestia is confused that Twilight is confused. They are dating, right? by Sapidus3 3,216 words · 5,751 views · 815 likes · 38 dislikes
  • Mysterious and Metaphorical Meanings of Marks Victorious over the vicious villain, thoughtful Twilight is taught the true talents and metaphorical meanings of the marks of the pretty pony princess. by Sapidus3 1,057 words · 556 views · 72 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Misunderstanding During what started as a perfectly fine Lunch, Twilight learns that her friends have somehow gotten it into their heads that she is in a relationship with her mentor and idol Princess Celestia. by Sapidus3 4,605 words · 8,902 views · 1,316 likes · 35 dislikes
  • Controlled Burn A wildfire is heading towards Ponyville, but luckily Twilight Sparkle has a plan. by Sapidus3 3,603 words · 523 views · 27 likes · 2 dislikes
  • A Princess and a Potion, a Curse and a Cure Twilight confesses her love to Princess Celestia, only to make a suprising discovery by Sapidus3 6,755 words · 4,329 views · 220 likes · 9 dislikes

Serious Non-Sad Stories

  • Horn Marrow Shining Armor has been infected by a Changeling poison that threatens to destroy his magic or worse. When Twilight and her family are tested to see if they could be potential horn marrow donors, an old family secret is brought to life. by Sapidus3 4,062 words · 4,129 views · 485 likes · 34 dislikes
  • One Night a Year One night a year, on the Eve of the Summer Sun Celebration, Princess Celestia is sad, at least according to Twilight's observations. She has a plan, a boardgame, and is determined to try to cheer up her mentor. by Sapidus3 4,996 words · 3,849 views · 619 likes · 19 dislikes
Jan
26th
2015

So there comes a time in every fanfic author's life when they would like to stop pushing things onto the internet that are more typos than story.

That time has come for me.

I already have two generous users who are giving Equestria's Twilight a look over before I post those chapters.

I do not have, however, anyone for After the Fall or for future oneshots (or I suppose for any of the future multi-chapters slowly working their way through the pipeline).

Feel free to comment or PM if you are interested. I'm looking for people that can spot grammar mistakes and can generally get back to me within a few days. It is also a plus if you can tell me ahead of time if my story is garbage so that I can fix it :pinkiehappy:

Also, being sick sucks so bad. I've managed to lose nearly four days of my life to a fever. I'm not getting those days back and I don't feel particularly well rested. The only thing of note I managed to accomplish was... I guess I watched DBZ abridged yesterday for some reason. I enjoyed, but don't know if I could say the same if my temperature had been less than 102.

I hate being sick.

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#193 · 4w, 1d ago · · ·

Read 6 of your stories today, they were really good

Comment posted by useruseruseruser deleted at 12:14am on the 27th of January, 2015
#191 · 5w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

>>1622028

Good thing, too. I had completely forgotten who you are until just know. You really need to learn how to let go.

I'm don't think Asylum is really thematically all that similar, it puts too much focus on the supernatural horror element. It's more the Silent Hill style of psychological themes than a horrifying look into psychology, if you get what I mean. It's not bad, but more fantastical than tragic. Would be a great Twilight Zone episode, though. Pun intended.

Comment posted by useruseruseruser deleted at 12:14am on the 27th of January, 2015
#189 · 5w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

>>1621640

Dude, I know you don’t like my fic, but seriously, either PM me and tell me precisely what you dislike about it, or just let it go.

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