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Latest Stories

  • T Not an Adult

    Twilight Sparkle has been living a lie. Everypony told her what a beautiful and accomplished mare she was. Everypony thought she was a responsible adult. They were wrong. She was still just a filly trying to stumble her way through life.  · Sapidus3
    4,178 words · 3,610 views  ·  519  ·  22
  • E Horn Marrow

    Shining Armor has been infected by a Changeling poison that threatens to destroy his magic or worse. When Twilight and her family are tested to see if they could be potential horn marrow donors, an old family secret is brought to life.  · Sapidus3
    3,967 words · 3,714 views  ·  446  ·  31
  • T One Night a Year

    One night a year, on the Eve of the Summer Sun Celebration, Princess Celestia is sad, at least according to Twilight's observations. She has a plan, a boardgame, and is determined to try to cheer up her mentor.  · Sapidus3
    4,996 words · 3,209 views  ·  546  ·  19 · sex
  • E Plus One

    Twilight is confused when she receives an invitation to a party that seems to assume she has a plus one already. Celestia is confused that Twilight is confused. They are dating, right?  · Sapidus3
    3,216 words · 4,891 views  ·  734  ·  33
  • E Mysterious and Metaphorical Meanings of Marks

    Victorious over the vicious villain, thoughtful Twilight is taught the true talents and metaphorical meanings of the marks of the pretty pony princess.  · Sapidus3
    1,057 words · 450 views  ·  64  ·  2
  • E Misunderstanding

    During what started as a perfectly fine Lunch, Twilight learns that her friends have somehow gotten it into their heads that she is in a relationship with her mentor and idol Princess Celestia.  · Sapidus3
    4,605 words · 8,097 views  ·  1,245  ·  33
  • T After the Fall

    Everyone is dead. She doesn't know who is responsible, just that somepony activated the ultimate weapon. Only four ponies survived and now try to find meaning in the great wasteland. Celestia will just be happy if she can find a way to heal Twilight.  · Sapidus3
    22,719 words · 1,416 views  ·  217  ·  7
  • T Diary One Hundred and Thirty Eight

    I know I'm not really her. Celestia is dead and gone. But I feel like I'm her, even though I'm not even a real pony. Twilight needs Celestia, so I will do my best to be Celestia. - An Equestria's Twilight Side Story -  · Sapidus3
    5,349 words · 290 views  ·  62  ·  2
  • T Influence

    After an innocent conversation, Shining Armor is feeling uneasy about his wife’s special talent and even more worried about something he learns regarding Princess Celestia. Luckily for him his sister is one of the most talented ponies in Equestria.  · Sapidus3
    6,580 words · 1,763 views  ·  193  ·  27
  • E Controlled Burn

    A wildfire is heading towards Ponyville, but luckily Twilight Sparkle has a plan.  · Sapidus3
    3,603 words · 491 views  ·  26  ·  2

Serious Sad/Dark Stories

  • Equestria's Twilight This is the story of the end. This is the story of the death of Equestria. by Sapidus3 134,293 words · 12,710 views · 980 likes · 21 dislikes
  • After the Fall Everyone is dead. She doesn't know who is responsible, just that somepony activated the ultimate weapon. Only four ponies survived and now try to find meaning in the great wasteland. Celestia will just be happy if she can find a way to heal Twilight. by Sapidus3 22,719 words · 1,416 views · 217 likes · 7 dislikes
  • Influence After an innocent conversation, Shining Armor is feeling uneasy about his wife’s special talent and even more worried about something he learns regarding Princess Celestia. Luckily for him his sister is one of the most talented ponies in Equestria. by Sapidus3 6,580 words · 1,763 views · 193 likes · 27 dislikes
  • Not an Adult Twilight Sparkle has been living a lie. Everypony told her what a beautiful and accomplished mare she was. Everypony thought she was a responsible adult. They were wrong. She was still just a filly trying to stumble her way through life. by Sapidus3 4,178 words · 3,610 views · 519 likes · 22 dislikes
  • Diary One Hundred and Thirty Eight I know I'm not really her. Celestia is dead and gone. But I feel like I'm her, even though I'm not even a real pony. Twilight needs Celestia, so I will do my best to be Celestia. - An Equestria's Twilight Side Story - by Sapidus3 5,349 words · 290 views · 62 likes · 2 dislikes

Comedies

  • Plus One Twilight is confused when she receives an invitation to a party that seems to assume she has a plus one already. Celestia is confused that Twilight is confused. They are dating, right? by Sapidus3 3,216 words · 4,891 views · 734 likes · 33 dislikes
  • Mysterious and Metaphorical Meanings of Marks Victorious over the vicious villain, thoughtful Twilight is taught the true talents and metaphorical meanings of the marks of the pretty pony princess. by Sapidus3 1,057 words · 450 views · 64 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Misunderstanding During what started as a perfectly fine Lunch, Twilight learns that her friends have somehow gotten it into their heads that she is in a relationship with her mentor and idol Princess Celestia. by Sapidus3 4,605 words · 8,097 views · 1,245 likes · 33 dislikes
  • Controlled Burn A wildfire is heading towards Ponyville, but luckily Twilight Sparkle has a plan. by Sapidus3 3,603 words · 491 views · 26 likes · 2 dislikes
  • A Princess and a Potion, a Curse and a Cure Twilight confesses her love to Princess Celestia, only to make a suprising discovery by Sapidus3 6,755 words · 4,279 views · 220 likes · 9 dislikes

Serious Non-Sad Stories

  • Horn Marrow Shining Armor has been infected by a Changeling poison that threatens to destroy his magic or worse. When Twilight and her family are tested to see if they could be potential horn marrow donors, an old family secret is brought to life. by Sapidus3 3,967 words · 3,714 views · 446 likes · 31 dislikes
  • One Night a Year One night a year, on the Eve of the Summer Sun Celebration, Princess Celestia is sad, at least according to Twilight's observations. She has a plan, a boardgame, and is determined to try to cheer up her mentor. by Sapidus3 4,996 words · 3,209 views · 546 likes · 19 dislikes
Jan
23rd
2015

Dead Fics · 2:54am

So I hit 500 followers today.

To celebrate I decided to make a blog post with links to some of my dead fics.

What do I mean by dead fics? These were things that I was working on two years ago (or whenever) before I went awol, but never posted. These fics are all incomplete and unedited, and in some cases poorly written. I suppose it is possible I could come back to them, but it is not very likely.

Read at your own peril.

Luna's Heresy

Forget the power of friendship and magic. Forget the promise of love and compassion, for in the grim and dark future of Equestria there is only war. There is no peace amongst the lands, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter... and the laughter of thirsting gods.

A grimdark fic inspired by Warhammer 40k, what a surprise. I actually kinda liked this one despite its unoriginality.

Knight Protector

The point of this one was going to be how Twilight has all these servants (Spike, Owlicious, ect) and was actually a pretty high ranking member of nobility, though you would not guess it from how she acts. I can't really say where it was going. This one I cannot imagine being resurrected.

Harmony Station

Only got two pages into this one. Basically the idea was that Twilight realized Equestria would need somepony to watch over it for the centuries while Celestia and Luna healed. So she built a space station...

Sparkle's Exile

This one I actually like the most out of all of these. I think the concept is sound. Celestia banishes Twilight temporarily to keep Luna from getting jealous of best pony. In the meantime Celestia has her memory edited, but luckily had forseen that happening and placed backups inside of Twilight's head. Her friends would be with her, but only by ghostly proxy. I could see tearing this one apart for a new story at some point in the distant future.

Finally for something completely different, a fic without a real name:

Dashie Human Competition Fic

AH! I wrote this last week when I, briefly, entertained notions of doing the more most dangerous game competition. It was basically going to be about the human in the story taking in a displaced Twilight Sparkle and the two of them learning to communicate, and... And it was a fic with humans in it.

In general I have no taste for human MLP fics. There are some exceptions. I greatly enjoyed the X-Com cross over (Stardust?) and if it would update faster A Unicorn at Hogwarts is something else I enjoyed. But both of those things were leveraging off of existing properties. This story, I just didn't feel there was any point adding it to the churning cauldron. So you can have it here.


If you subjected yourself to any of these stories I apologize if you wish you had that time back. If you actually enjoyed any of them, I apologize that I have plans finishing these.

That's all I guess.

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#192 · 1d, 22h ago · · 1 ·

>>1622615

Your opinion is noted and discarded.

#191 · 2d, 2h ago · · 1 ·

>>1622028

Good thing, too. I had completely forgotten who you are until just know. You really need to learn how to let go.

I'm don't think Asylum is really thematically all that similar, it puts too much focus on the supernatural horror element. It's more the Silent Hill style of psychological themes than a horrifying look into psychology, if you get what I mean. It's not bad, but more fantastical than tragic. Would be a great Twilight Zone episode, though. Pun intended.

#190 · 2d, 11h ago · · ·

>>1621746

There I fixed it, I let my argumentative impulse get the better of me.

#189 · 2d, 17h ago · · 1 ·

>>1621640

Dude, I know you don’t like my fic, but seriously, either PM me and tell me precisely what you dislike about it, or just let it go.

#188 · 2d, 19h ago · · 1 ·

>>1619605

Unwell is so melodramatic it reads more like a comedy than anything else.  If you like soap opera fanfiction then I'd say go for it.

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