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Jul
4th
2014

Howdy, all. I wrote a story a few days ago for Obselescence's The Most Dangerous Game Contest, but I've refrained from publishing it because it was one of those "finish the story twenty minutes before the deadline" sort of things, so it's... first draft-y, to put it generously.

So, it could use more eyeballs on it to help me find all the holes I left while I was frantically smashing keys. And therefore, anybody who wants to have a look and gimme some feedback, feel free. Shoot me a PM, leave a comment, however you wanna handle it is fine by me. There are undoubtedly plenty of grammar-and-phrasing nits to pick, so don't be shy about 'em, but mainly what I'm interested in is the bigger-picture stuff - where the story lost you, things that didn't make sense, things that should be expanded upon, and so on.

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  • Darkly Dreaming Pinkie Pinkie has a nightmare, and Twilight comforts her. by NorsePony 1,567 words · 3,992 views · 200 likes · 6 dislikes
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  • The War and What Came After The earth had belonged to the People since time immemorial, until the ponies came to push them out. For centuries, they have hidden in the forest, slowly losing ground to their enemies. But now, the gods have chosen two young warriors. by NorsePony 21,487 words · 1,661 views · 198 likes · 9 dislikes
  • The Rough in the Diamond Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are the best of friends, or are they? by NorsePony 6,021 words · 1,400 views · 94 likes · 14 dislikes
  • Lipogram A story written without using the letter "E". by NorsePony 1,173 words · 1,846 views · 84 likes · 5 dislikes

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#1295128 · 12w, 5d ago · · ·

Hi NorsePony! How are you? :pinkiehappy:

#819231 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·

Norse...pony...

I thought it said Porse Nony..

Wat.

#550935 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·

>>550920 Hah, that's awesome.

#550920 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·

>>550904

It really is.  12 years after moving halfway across the country from my home town, and 7 after making friends with some people, I found out that those people and I had not only grown up in the same town, but had been friends with the same people at school.  The only reason I didn't know this was that I'd met our mutual friends about a year after those people had moved away.

Freaky...  :rainbowderp:

#550904 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·

>>550887 Ahh, I see. It's a small world sometimes. : D

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