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May
31st
2015

Rainbow Dash gets killed, and then things get really annoying. The guy who killed her is a total jerk who thinks he's so smart, and Luna is hardly any help at all. Dash is just gonna have to sort things out for herself so she can get back to being all cool and alive.

Rainbow Dash and the Wild Hunt, a comedy-adventure starring Rainbow Dash, Princess Luna, and a mysterious guest! (Spoiler: he's not actually all that mysterious.) (Also spoiler: he's not much of a guest.)

I hope you enjoy it. :D

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#37 · 13w, 2d ago · · ·

This was exactly what I was looking for! Thank you so much! I can see what you mean and after writing out a brief plan of how the next 30 or so chapters were going to go then looking at this I can see that this prologue I have written is not needed.

This shouldn't be in the prologue at all, because this is just you telling-not-showing the first chapter or two of the story. It would make sense if this were a sequel story and the prologue was meant to catch the reader up on what happened in the earlier stories, but in a first story this just seems massively lazy.
Okay, I will admit to being lazy with this. I understand what you mean by telling-not-showing here and I think that I will keep the prologue but I won't end up using it in the actual story. Thanks for really explaining this for me. (Sorry but the thread was locked and I couldn't reply in the normal way. Again, thanks for the help!)

#36 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Hi NorsePony! How are you? :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 86w, 6d ago · · ·

Norse...pony...

I thought it said Porse Nony..

Wat.

#34 · 106w, 5d ago · · ·

>>550920 Hah, that's awesome.

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