Open call for beta readers · 5:24am
Howdy, all. I wrote a story a few days ago for Obselescence's The Most Dangerous Game Contest, but I've refrained from publishing it because it was one of those "finish the story twenty minutes before the deadline" sort of things, so it's... first draft-y, to put it generously.
So, it could use more eyeballs on it to help me find all the holes I left while I was frantically smashing keys. And therefore, anybody who wants to have a look and gimme some feedback, feel free. Shoot me a PM, leave a comment, however you wanna handle it is fine by me. There are undoubtedly plenty of grammar-and-phrasing nits to pick, so don't be shy about 'em, but mainly what I'm interested in is the bigger-picture stuff - where the story lost you, things that didn't make sense, things that should be expanded upon, and so on.