Dem Feels · 3:37am

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I FUCKING LOVE THESE STORIES
These stories are awesome
Favorite Chess Games After a war with Equestria, humans were forced into hiding, all that remains of them are myths and stories about horrible monsters. But what happens when Jace and Alex manage alert their presence to everypony and release a hoard of monsters in the process. It's time to quit hiding in the shadows and step into the light..
I'm trying to make this story as reader interactive as possible without ruining it so if you guys have any ideas, OCs, thoughts, scenes, you know... that kind of stuff send me a message and I will adapt the story to how I see it fit. I will readjust the tags accordingly when I update.
This is my first OFFICIAL fan fiction, it contains sort of a steampunk theme but very lightly. Reviews, feedback and anything else helps. Thanks.
>>366990 I am on the same boat, I have been trying to get my story for my OC out, but it is always getting beaten by the essays and homework. I hate school.

>>352959 I have a huge writers block right now, ive made a bunch of progress with forgotten as in story wise and how i want it to go, the problem is writing it out, not to mention i have a job now, and schools kinda been kicking my ass as well, if i've mentioned an idea feel free to use it. I want to write some but I've hadn't have the chance you know...
Hey man. So, I have a question. Are you working solely on Forgotten? Or are you going to be tossing your other stories back out there?
>>195329
i guess it'll be sad, adventureous, comedic in some ways, human, alternate universe, and slice of life... i think
>>194452 oh also i need to know the tags, like is it a comedy, romance, tragic, sad... because those can effect the title, and the appeal to the reader
>>192870
well, that answer is better than nothing
>>192609 Mazamis in Equestria... that would be me... no internet and im a dead man... honestly let me think and i will get back to you on that one
>>192594
thanks for the feedback, but i'm not put up for these kinds of stories, i'm starting a new one for a man displaced from human society and placed into the pony culture, basically HiE but he will be suffering from addictions and the lack of power from the human world (such as no computers, oil lamp on a table to do homework and that such). if you could think up of a title for this, then i'd be greatful.
>>191990 seems like too many commas, and if this was a story it would seem... off BUT its a narrative and those are meant to sound like they came from the persons mind, almost like you can read attitude (i dont know if that makes sense) it would be good if its a narrative story, also... i dont get it because its too short but im sure youre working on it
>>190967
srsly though, i need your help to read something i've wrote to make me at ease and to tell me my writing is fine, here