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Just a Pinch of Magic

Berry Punch may be the town alcoholic, but it hasn't always been that way. Though she has always seen herself as vulnerable and undesireable, she was once a young mare full of hopes and dreams just like anypony else. This story hilights one of the most difficult and most wonderful periods of her life: the birth of her daughter, as well as her love for the brown stallion who made her life worth living.

But Cherry Cola has some secrets of his own. Will they get in the way of his relationship with the one he is certain is his soulmate, or is Berry truly the pony he trusts she is, ready to forgive and forget and make a life together work out.

I tried to write an adventure story, an exciting slice of life story, and a fun story but of course the first fanfic I feel confident enough in to post is a sappy, cheesy, love story that may not even rival Twilight. And yes, the cover image is original which is why it's so bad. Honestly, I want as much feedback on this as possible - be mean, I can take it. I'd really like to improve.

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Beginnings are fun · 5:14am

Endings are hard. I have about four fics on the go, and I really want to get close to finishing at least one before I post any of the chapters. I don't want to leave a story hanging in incomplete limbo like I always do.

Sad thing is, the only story I'm at all confident in writing at the moment is a sappy romance-ship story. Ugh.

In writing it, I went and created a whole family of ponies for these two right here:

Aren't they cute? Picture courtesy of Briskby on DeviantArt.

I made parents, and then three siblings. In my mind, Berry is the oldest and Pina Colada is the youngest of five children. The story is set about eight years ago, when the mane six were still in high school, around the time Pina Colada was born.

(Stoled from Beavernator on DA)

Also, I love General Zoi's pony creator. It makes it possible for ponies like me, who can hardly draw, to actually create the ponies they're visualizing. I wish the cutie marks would show up better, but besides that I love the program.

Their mother, Vodka Sunrise

Dad: Whiskey Mac

Second oldest, Margarita:

Margarita like the drink (all their kids are named after drinks), which comes from the name "Margaret," which means Pearl. Hence the pearl necklace.

Middle Child: Martini Olive

Martinis make me think of M*A*S*H, and so does Olive drab. I figure Martin here is getting sick of being called "Teeny Martini" at school and wants to joing the army.

Second youngest, Lime Rickey

Once I get a bit more written, I'll post the story. :)

Jenga_Jane · 26 views