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Nov
18th
2014

Good day, good day to all. It has been an interesting day and so, I thought I'd share a little story.

This afternoon, I got an intriguing message from one reader named Smoker. Despite the fact that his by "no means its biggest fan - it has its share of flaws, no offense -" (direct quote, as is basically everything else), he wanted to write a sequel to The Journey of Graves. At the same time, I noticed that he'd left some comments on A Long, Winding Road. Naturally, I figured I'd give it a look and see what he had to say about the story.

For ducks sake have these bitches heard of common sense.

Hmm... interesting opening comment. But maybe his later comments get better.

I have To say after last chapter, this one just seems like the author is desperately trying not to make graves seem over powered. And he falls miserably.

Okay, so I'm a failure of a writer? Well that's... interesting. What else?

This is quite possibly the most stupidly overpowered mary sue I have ever encountered in my entire life.

... Yeah, I'm not following anymore. But more there is.

At the very least, there is a tiny little silver lining: Rarity actually grows a brain cell and decides NOT to go on her suicide mission to find him. Point to Rarity.

...

Wait, no, just read the last bit of the story. She's fucking stupid as hell after all. Two points from Rarity house.

Alright, now he's dissing the marshal's girl. That isn't gonna end well and indeed, it doesn't, for you see, his last comment was:

Not - not even humoring us.

fuck it. i'm done.

Well, what to do, what to do? I'm usually pleased as punch about having a reader want to do work based on The Journey, but this? This was just not cool. Considering he doesn't even understand what I'm trying to write here, let alone appreciate it, meant that obviously, I had to deny his request in the absolute. His response?

...and developed characters i've seen more well developed characters on the back of a cereal box you think this is good writing this is just malignant tripe you send form letters to everyone who comments on your stories as an attempt to whore yourself out and get more followers what is this bullshit none of it makes sense.

Ladies and gentlemen, as I have stated in the title, this is a prime example of what you don't want to do. First, don't ask to write a sequel after posting horrendously mean spirited remarks. Second, when you're predictably refused, don't throw a hissy fit. I mean, seriously, "malignant tripe?" And calling me a whore? Though I don't need to defend myself, I figure I should explain. Yes, I do sent out letters to commentors, favoriters, and the like because I happen to love people who read my stories. Also, I always figure that a personal invitation to join in is a nice little touch, especially since if it happens, people can keep up with my stories more easily and I can grow The Journey community a little more. Everybody wins! Why Smoker considers this "bullshit none of it makes sense" is truly beyond me.

Now, some of you may be asking why I'm making a post about this. Because a gentleman always defends his honor and the honor of those in his care, wot wot! But really, I did it I want to make it clear that I will not stand for this sort of behavior. Am I salty about it? About as much as saltwater taffy, I suppose. These sorts of comments do irk me a bit (after all, nobody likes being called a whore), but on the bright side, they also makes me really grateful for the people who do understand.

I may have to deal with hecklers like Smoker, but I've gotten to meet infinitely more wonderful people. There are the artists like The Reanimator (creator of Journey's End artwork) and Captain Pudge Muffin (creator of Untangling the Knot artwork), MrBackPack, the editor who helped me get my start, Intrapulation the YouTuber, the remaining anonymous reader who sent me The Definition of Worth letter, Valient Bug, the first person to ever follow me who is still following The Journey to this very day, and so many more. I could go on (and I will at a later date), but I just realized it's funny how a bad egg can make you count all the blessings you really have.

So yeah, all in all, I guess that not even the greatest communities can keep out the trolls (reference intended), but it really doesn't matter. What's important is that I say thanks to all the readers who continue to enjoy The Journey. Hope you get a chuckle out of this message and know that I am so grateful for each and every one of you. Adieu!

Sincerely,

GentlemanJ

P.S. New chapter comes out tomorrow, 6:30 Eastern. I think that'll be the standard time for all posts unless people want a different time? Let me know!

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The Journey of Graves: Season 1

  • When the Man Comes Around As Ponyville prepares for arriving royal marshals, a new traveler quietly slips into town. by GentlemanJ 22,211 words · 18,578 views · 1,180 likes · 38 dislikes
  • So... What Happens Next? Ordered to stay in Ponyville, Graves finds that his new life will take some getting used to. by GentlemanJ 7,070 words · 8,288 views · 873 likes · 17 dislikes
  • Trouble Meets Disaster Marshal Graves gets settled in, but is called away on duty. Oddly enough, Sweetie Belle tags along. by GentlemanJ 13,521 words · 7,714 views · 818 likes · 16 dislikes
  • Two Kinds of Complications Rarity wants a date. Sweetie Belle wants a brother. Lucky Graves just wants a day without headaches. by GentlemanJ 14,433 words · 7,580 views · 801 likes · 19 dislikes
  • Untangling the Knot by GentlemanJ 21,591 words · 7,036 views · 787 likes · 18 dislikes
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#138 · 1w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1522453 Ah, gotcha. Makes sense, though. I don't even know how people write 50k a month. That's just ain't natural.

#137 · 1w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1522450 Hell no. I write pretty slowly, and don't do long stories well. Like half my stuff is under 2000 words long, and the only longer stories are all compilations of shorter ones.

#136 · 1w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1522444 Dude, that's a bummer. But hey, congrats on passing 20k! You doing the NanoRiMo thing?

#135 · 1w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1522443 Great! Just crossed the 20,000 word mark on one of my stories for the first time! Except then it got 2 down votes and no new upvotes when it updated. :fluttershysad:

#134 · 1w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1522440 I am good! How are you?

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