Chapter 2 of Those Who Watch was entirely scrapped in favor of a different perspective.
Fun fact: Chapter two of Those Who Watch has been written for two weeks. The editing is not coming along well. I'm not even sure I even like how it turned out. I'm going to finish editing the seven or so pages left and throw it in front a better horror writer than I.
See what they think of it. There is a chance that the entire work could get thrown under a bus and scrapped.
Then again, Chapter 1 was written in a day, so I just need the proper flash of inspiration.