A mystical power takes over Equestria and begins to cause problems, but what really worries Twilight Sparkle and gang is the fact that Princess Luna disappears, Celestia stops replying to letters, and an ancient mystery alicorn suddenly appears.
Majestic Jewel and Aqua Treasure can't get along, at all. So to protect the big city of Manehatten, and try to work out their problems, they are sent to Ponyville to start new lives, and hopefully become friends.
aw don't go. But I will continue to read your stories on the other site. will you leave the that site too.please say no sorry computer broke, using PS3 can't send PMs sorry
276406 No, I appreciate it. And the way it was put to me before was that I wasn't good enough, not that they are overdone, which I understand. Thanks for the advice!
~I won't stop writing just because you think I'm not good enough to have an alicorn OC.~
Love, its not the fact that we don't think you are good enough, its the fact that OC alicorns are overrated, and there has to be a pretty darn good backstory for it if you expect the readers here to read the story. If you want readers, you have to draw them in really well, and for that, I don't suggest using title pictures made by ponies from the pony creator. Also, just so you know, OCs with dead parents, related to someone from the mane six, and a sob story for a backstory won't get much read either. You should probably develop some of your OCs before putting them in a story.
aw don't go. But I will continue to read your stories on the other site.
will you leave the that site too.please say no
sorry computer broke, using PS3 can't send PMs sorry
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Thanks for the watch.
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No problem.
Anytime you need advice, feel free to ask me.
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276406 No, I appreciate it. And the way it was put to me before was that I wasn't good enough, not that they are overdone, which I understand. Thanks for the advice!
Love, its not the fact that we don't think you are good enough, its the fact that OC alicorns are overrated, and there has to be a pretty darn good backstory for it if you expect the readers here to read the story.
If you want readers, you have to draw them in really well, and for that, I don't suggest using title pictures made by ponies from the pony creator.
Also, just so you know, OCs with dead parents, related to someone from the mane six, and a sob story for a backstory won't get much read either. You should probably develop some of your OCs before putting them in a story.
Hope I didn't sound rude,
~Muffinpatrol
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