OK, ok, ok, ok. · 5:39pm Aug 12th, 2013
So, I think what I was doing wrong was that I was writing chapters too long. I need to tone it down to like, 300 words. Then I should be able to get this thing worked on. So when I finish this, I will have a bit more experience in FIMfic and can take another stab at this. I'm going to try to do this crap and do it right.
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