Guys I have made a horrible mistake in writing How It Works. I recently attempted to submit How It Works to Equestria Daily, but it was denied due to grammatical errors and lack of character development (watchya gonna do?) but there was something else brought to my attention as they reviewed the story: The story seems to portray a rape-like situation and makes light of it. This is NEVER what I intended for How It Works to be, nor do I ever want any of you to think that this is what the story is

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Hey guys in case you haven't seen this yet, I am rewriting How It Works. I'm not changing the story or anything in the long run, but I am adding a lot more to it. There will be a lot more drama, continuity, story, background, emotion, more characters everything! Even if you've read the original I suggest you go read version 2.0, there is so many things new I imagine you will find it a lot more enjoyable than the first version! So far I have rewritten the Prologue and the first two chapters, it

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Hey guys, I've been on DA forever but I just joined on here, I hope you guys like my story How It Works!