well another one bites the dust...

The module that your story inspired has since inspired a bookshelf!
https://www.fimfiction.net/bookshelf/614725/stories-that-need-a-whole-hell-of-a-lot-more-love
Hope you come back.

Aww, what happened to Hocus Pocus?
Well, considering that I now have to update the module that your story inspired, I figured you should see it before I change it. So here you go:
i.imgur.com/XtbIG2P.png

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/80771/prince-of-the-kingdom-of-bones

Hehe, I thank you for having the courage to actually NOT give my story glowing praise, and to actually deem it worthy of receiving criticism. Having one's flaws pointed out to them is crucial if one wishes to grow, so again I thank you for complaining about the things most people have swept under the rug... such AS my HABIT of TRYING to MAKE everything I type SEEM omfgdaEPICS