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Thanks for the fave on The Celestia Code!
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That's a really good idea, and I may just roll with it if you don't mind. The main thing I'm changing is Nimbus's reason for being up on the mountain. I think the new version should fit into the story better. Thanks for following this story, and many thanks for the extremely useful feedback!
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The rest of that chapter was good, so don't stress too much over it. I just felt the flashback came out of nowhere and didn't really ad anything. Perhaps replace Celestia with Nimbus' little brother. Even just leaving the scene as is and just remove where Celestia refers to it.
Otherwise, 15 chapters that deserve more likes.