2468422
Absolutely, love the presentation in the story. Don't be afraid of adding elements of development to lengthen your story. Take your time, because your a very good writer. Keep up the good work.

thanks for the fave on "Solving a dazzling puzzle" stay tuned for a new chapter next week (if everything in my schedule goes as planned)

1934607

Awesome! Take your time with the story. Quality > Quantity and all that good jazz.

1934597
Yeah, I've just found myself with less time to write than I thought I'd have since my job doesn't have a set amount of hours so it's different each week.