2222565 thank you once again for reading, and stay tuned

2222341 Bad stuff: Grammar and punctuation; very few. VERY few but they are there. One to two parts seem a little sped up.
Good stuff: Amazingly written characters. They're lively and full of emotion. Easy to read and a lot of fun. You've caught my attention both in your words and the thumbnail you used. I can't wait to read more of you're artistic beauty.

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