962077 Sorry for the late reply.
I'm glad that you enjoy my story, despite the obvious flaws it has in the earlier chapters.
I know that there's been a long time since I updated it, but since then I've been working on more fics to train myself before continuing with this one. I can confirm that I'm currently writing the next chapter, but I'm not sure when I'll release it.

Thank you again! :)

Good Sir,(or Madam), please update your story, "Dovahkin Ponyborn" soon. I miss reading it greatly and would love to learn what happens next. Thank you and good day (PS i am playing here but i really would like to see an update. Do you know when there might be one? Thank you very much. AWESOME STORY)

345633 well not everything is perfect and even if English isn't you native language at least your trying and that's all that really matters just like at the moment I'm doing my first story and i know that's its not perfect but i'm still giving it a go. So pretty much all we need to do is just keep trying till its just right or at least you think its perfect and if you don't think its perfect then ask a good friend of yours and ask what he/she thinks of it.

345539 Aww... thank you! It means a lot to me.

But yeah, I know it's not perfect. After all, English is not my native language. But I'm trying.

More coming soon. :3

i'm surprised that you don't have a lot of like for your story because i think its a great story (well apart from a few mistakes here and there) hell on my page i even have it as one of my top 5 favorite stories because its that good anyway i'm just here to let you know that i'm looking forward to the updated and keep up with the great story and i'm sure you will start getting more likes ......... actually you know what to show how much i like you story i will follow you