Well, "Rainbow's Revelation" is out of the feature box, and finished as well, so I guess now is a good time to say this: Thanks. Thanks to everyone that read the story, thanks for the favourites, thanks for the comments.
When I posted the story last wednesday, I pretty much expected to get about a hundred views and maybe a few helpful comments. When I checked back two hours later to see it in the feature box, my brain kinda stopped working and set me into a perpetually grinning state.