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So that’s what I did well? Also, did you/will you tell Valiant that we both wanna see him narrate the grim aspect of war and the logistics? And also what I said about the recap of latest events in the narrations. If we both told him directly in the comments, it might further sway/convince him

3316964spelling on the phone isn't the greates at times. it supose to be wound* injuries as no warrior are invincibel from geting some injuries at time if fighting a oponenet wiht = skill or multipel enemies at onces.

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Sorry, what did you say carakters?

But we mostly followed then the story off like the wardens eyes, or the chieften struggle, and small inklicks off the lings perspektive.

But in a straight perspektive. First one was more focused with the grim aspekt off war and logistik with a small dash off romance here and there, when the situastion called for it.

Yeah I liked that stuff from the first one too; we can both tell Valiant in the comments that that's what we liked to see, and want to see in upcoming chapters. Tell him to more/better write about the grim aspect of the war, the logistics, and how the narrator monologues about all of it; like how I talked about this in the comments...

But you did well to discribe how they get slightly wonder over time after battle.

What did you mean I did well? and what did you mean by 'slightly wonder over time after battle?'

The first one had a bit more detailed fighting in like the start off a engament and small description here and there when the carakters thought many enemis. But you did well to discribe how they get slightly wonder over time after battle.

And elements took time to talk mingel as they get to know them more. So they had an broather understanding off there cultsure.

But we mostly followed then the story off like the wardens eyes, or the chieften struggle, and small inklicks off the lings perspektive.

But in a straight perspektive. First one was more focused with the grim aspekt off war and logistik with a small dash off romance here and there, when the situastion called for it.