Your first chapter is pretty good
(Don't make me sad in the end)

122513 Go ahead

Um, I know that I posted on your story too, but I just wanted to tell you that if you see my story when it's published, I didn't copy anything from you. It has the same name and it probably has a very different plot, but I don't know exactly because I am refraining from reading your story so I do not copy anything. Just letting you know because I don't want any hate mail saying that I copied from you or something.

Sorry if I sound stupid or annoying.

First.

good luck with the fic