Last minute adjustments · 1:43am Nov 19th, 2012
Hey everypony, I'm still working on the story. Which is turning out very hard. For the fact I'm trying to edit every last bit of my story. f0xhole is helping me with it, again big props to him for helping me. So keep up the commenting and rating and more will be on the way. By the way, don't hesitate to ask what can be improved in some paragraphs and sentences.