136901 That's fairly original. I'd suggest taking extra special care on a few things; grammar, spelling and not making your OC overpowered. Criticism here is judged mainly around those.
136895 I'm thinking about writing maybe a 3rd person fic about him and he can be like a superhero that has to deal with fighting crime in ponyville and also has to deal with a normal job and life. What do you think? I've never really asked anyone for feedback on this before.
Thanks for the favor!
137437
Damn you're right, this does sound extremely original. I've got a lot of thinking to do if I want this to be interesting.
136901
That's fairly original. I'd suggest taking extra special care on a few things; grammar, spelling and not making your OC overpowered. Criticism here is judged mainly around those.
136895
I'm thinking about writing maybe a 3rd person fic about him and he can be like a superhero that has to deal with fighting crime in ponyville and also has to deal with a normal job and life. What do you think? I've never really asked anyone for feedback on this before.
136892
Sounds awesome.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png