• Member Since 28th Aug, 2012
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Sideswipe


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137437
Damn you're right, this does sound extremely original.:twilightoops: I've got a lot of thinking to do if I want this to be interesting.

136901
That's fairly original. I'd suggest taking extra special care on a few things; grammar, spelling and not making your OC overpowered. Criticism here is judged mainly around those.

136895
I'm thinking about writing maybe a 3rd person fic about him and he can be like a superhero that has to deal with fighting crime in ponyville and also has to deal with a normal job and life. What do you think? :rainbowderp:I've never really asked anyone for feedback on this before.

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