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I thought the start was a little weak and awkward, but many fics take a bit of time to get going, especially because of needing to introduce things, and a start can always be fixed up a little later.

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I thought you didn't like it.

Any reason for unpublishing "Equestria Wolves in Sonic Frontiers"? I was quite curious where it was going with things.

Thanks for adding "Equestria Wolves: The Pack is Family, The Pack is Life" to your Favorites! If you enjoy it that much, then I think you'll love the sequel I have planned for it!