One month later, and I finish it!

I know it's not very long (the chapters, and the story) but I appreciate the feedback from all my readers. I'm balancing this with about a bajillion other things, but I've got spring break next week, so I'ma buckle down and punch out another chapter hopefully.

this is harder than it looks, because I wasn't expecting it to turn to this direction.

THIS CALLS FOR:

In all seriousness I know 1,000 isn't that many compared to some of the greats, but it IS a good milestone for me. The hardest part of this is finding loopholes I've made on accident and brainstorming the best ways to fix them. I hit a pretty big one after the recent chapter; if you can spot it, I give you props; but you probably wont.

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I've been getting some feedback about the "unsolved" opening of the recent chapter.

It will be resolved at the end of this flashback.

HOORAY!

Slowly but surly I pressed this one out.

OMG BACKSTORY amirite?

There's more where that came from.

I had The Ward (what I have done, anyway) reviewed on PonyChan over the weekend. I've got some revisions that are going to be put in across all chapters.

My main issue seems to be making the [little] dialogue I have more natural and my love for ellipsis. That's what I've spent most of my weekend doing. Then there are a few grammatical errors and unintentional capitalizations.

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More time to try to add a couple chapters to my story!

Hopefully will power through it on The Ward, so I can work on Hoofball again.