I, just to spice things up a little, decided to start drawing for my stories. Hoping it would help to get a feel of the situations. I'm not bad as an artist, and I thought it would be a good idea. I just want to see what my readers think, after all this is all for you guys. For instance the cover art for Spice on the wind. The cover art for my latest will be better, and a bit more humorous. So please, give me your opinions.
For the few readers I have, I wanted to give a random sneak peak at an upcoming fic.
"I feel weird... I like it, but it's weird." He said, turning, and leaning against the window. He sat, just thinking about how he felt, when-
"HOLY HAY, WHAT IS THAT?!" Vinyl yelled, and he turned to see them both looking at him. He put his hoof on the window, and Octavia screamed.
Hey guys, not feeling quite at the top of my game today. I'm getting over a few issues in my life. You guys (being bronies) probably know how I feel. My mother called my being a brony gay and satanic... Not even joking. Not even paraphrasing. She straight out said that bronies are a bunch of pedophiles. You guys have probably heard these claims countless times, as have I, but it hurt a lot coming from my mother. Upside to the story, I have some more sad energy for a sad story. Just gonna...
I've finally posted another chapter of spice on the wind, and I seem to be getting near the end of the story. So I am going to ask... How can I improve upon my story(ies)? What do you guys want to see? I'm open to constructive criticism, and am more than ready to make a few changes. I also haven't decided on which ending to use just yet, so bare with me as I struggle awkwardly. My next chapter should be a pretty good one by the looks of it.
I've been working on spice on the wind for 8 weeks now, and it's shaping up pretty well, and I was wanting all of your input on a few things.
1- Is it at all hard to follow? This I've been wondering since day 1.
2- Are there any plot holes I missed? I will often re-read some of my old stories and find I left out tidbits of info that twisted the story slightly into what I didn't want.
As you can guess I just got back from a vacation. I can now say I have touched a stingray, a alligator, and a shark! I had a great hotel room, and went to the beach too. All in all I had a fantastic week. The only downside was the long cramped car rides. I'm ready to get to work, and start writing. Oh, and I've got a new little doodad; a brony wristband from Hot Topic. Now I can receive random comments about my brony...ness? (Side question: lately I've been wanting to learn to use flash