Minor tweaks · 6:26am Sep 6th, 2012
Did some minor tweaks and adjustments to several chapters to clean them up a bit, on advice of my editors. No plot-changing alterations, just some tightening up of places to make the story and writing more coherent. A lot of them might be subtle, so you probably won't notice them right off (unless you memorized every single mistake I made in the first eight chapters).