https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/personal-repository-of-ideas-and-snippets.772315/ & https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/shard-of-magic-mlp-fim-worm.764257/

It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.

I am a fanfic critic i will give your work a number from 1 to 200. But i will only mark your work if you have more then 10 fanfic storys

"I hereby challenge you, Ponyvillians: anything you can do, I can do better. Any takers? Anyone?" - Trixie Lulamoon  

French, born the 9th day of the 9th month, 1986. Currently in training course. And maybe soon-to-be reservist.

Sci-Fi geek, smart-ass, and Brony For Life!I'm a newbie at writing, but I'm open to *constructive* criticism and advice. If you think I can improve in some way, let me know ASAP!

I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.

Hey, guys, got a story you need reviewed? Well, feel free to send me a private message with the story you want reviewed and I will give you a review as soon as I can.

Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

I believe in my whole race. Yellow, white, black, red, brown in the honesty, courage, intelligence, durability and goodness of the overwhelming majority of my brothers and sisters everywhere