First things first.  The last few lines of chapter 12 were bugging me.   I’m not sure what the best word to describe them is, just that they seemed wrong.  Also, I realized I forgot a very obvious faction that would almost certainly join Plan Sigma.  So I had to add a reference to them.  They’re extremely minor changes, hardly worth rereading.  Their sections just make more sense now.

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Wow. Remind me to do a "find in page" search before uploading. Our surprise guest, Ruby, had a different name when I first started chapter 12, but I realized I had to change it once I got about halfway through. But wouldn't you know it, I didn't catch all the instances of the name's first version, even during multiple proofreading attempts. So I uploaded it, read through it again, and realized I was referring to a character that didn't exist anymore. It took two separate reuploads before I

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Hey all,
I've fallen a bit behind in my desired creation schedule. Combination of a very busy week at work and a 2 week vacation that I literally just got back from means I've made almost no progress on the next chapter. Sorry.

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Hey all,
I was a little too quick to upload Chapter 10 and the Interlude. There were a few things I realized I needed to add before killing the Analysts off. There's a little more backstory/context in the Interlude now. Not story-essential, but it might be worth rereading to more fully flesh out the setting.

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Hey all,
I thought I'd share some of the behind-the-scenes work that's going on. The number of factions Dew and Rusty encounter is going to expand. By a lot. And that's ignoring the faction they just killed off. I decided to throw together a chart detailing what these factions think of each other, just so I'd have something to reference once the factions start interacting.

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Hey all,
Well, here it is. Rusty's deepest secret. The reason I knew I had to change this fic's rating from T to M. Along with killing off Rusty's neighbor back in chapter 1, this was one of the first plot points I ever decided to include.
And a surprise guest as well! Wasn't initially planning on including any of the Mane 6, even if she's just a Mirror Pool duplicate, but I'm glad I did. Pinkie Pie is ridiculously fun to write!

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Hey all,
I reached a decent stopping point in chapter 9, but I decided the chapter was too short to end it there. So I kept going, only to realize my end-of-chapter goal would turn it into the longest chapter I've written so far! I'm making good progress (getting rid of Ema certainly helped; I no longer have to open a thesaurus twice per sentence!) but the length of the chapter means there'll be a larger gap between uploads. It should be worth it though.

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Hey all,

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Hi all,
I missed my goal of once-weekly uploads with this one, but I wanted to get Rusty and Dew out of clopper territory before the start of chapter 8. And that turned out to mean a longer chapter than usual. Hence, delay.

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Hey all,

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