I was reviewing my story and noticed a lot of flaws in the plot so I changed it a bit. Go check it out, I swear it's better before to the ones who have had read it. Thanks Everypony!

Im desperate for someone to give me any feedback on the short segment of a story I made a month ago. Please help!

Okay, if any of you have reviewed my description on the story(The Afterlife) im working on and want to read it, please be patient. I dont wanna make excused but I just got working on it today and when I finished my chapter my computer deleted it all when it shut off. Annnnnndddddd.....for any of you that have not seen it lemme just sum up the story....Vinyl Scratch dies of drug overdose and I write about her afterlife. P.S I just started this fimfiction writing thing, but I've always been a

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