I know I said I wouldn't touch chapter 1 of Royal Brat's Reality Check anymore after the big QA pass... but I've already gone back on that several times.
Sometimes I just re-read what I've already written, searching for motivation or perhaps pacing guidance for what I'm writing next and nearly every time I do this I find something tiny somewhere in chapter 1 that I just don't like. And I mean really, obsessively tiny at times.

In part 2, I changed

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