oops posted my first story as a comment lol oh well I leave it like that cuz why not

It was a very hot day in Pony Ville Applejack and 12 other ponies have gone missing. Since Twilight is to busy stressing over keeping the citizens of pony Ville calm and working with the Pegasi to make Pony Ville colder she didn't have time to look for the missing ponies. She decided to send Sunset Shimmer one of her friendship students to have a look for applejack and the other missing ponies. Sunset Shimmer went into the Apple Family's Orchard to find Applejack she knew enough spells to keep herself safe from anything in the Apple family's orchard. As she went into the orchard she saw some of Applejacks farm tools lying around on the orchard ground. This made Sunset Shimmer think maybe Applejack was out here doing some work but that doesn't explain what could of happen to her. Sunset then found a video camera lying on the ground she picked it up with her red magic aura and saw there was a video recorded Sunset Shimmer started watching the video. In the video it had Snips and Snails were recording in the orchard the camera was being held by Snails while Snips told the camera "ponies still judge us for bringing an Ersa Minor to Pony Ville". Snails then started talking "to make up for that horrible mistake we made we are gonna find Applejack or the 13 missing ponies" Snails Said. The two young ponies started walking in the orchard looking for the ponies they wandered into a part of the orchard that had been abandoned for years. In the Orchard they smelt a horrible smell Snips said "what is that horrible smell" Snails then said "oh no timber wolves what if Applejack got eaten by Timberwolves" Snips started thinking "hmm it could be but why would they been in the orchard" They then saw something on the tree it was the dead body of Bon Bon the two ponies screamed and started running. They ran as long as they could before they ran out of breath they then saw Applejack Snips said "Applejack thank Celestia your ok we saw Bon Bon and a bunch of other ponies all dead. Applejack was not looking like her usual self her mane was very messy her eye pupils were small and there were black rings around her eyes her back hoofs were bloody and bandaged. Snips said "woah applejack are you ok did the Timberwolves do this to you?" Applejack bucked Snips to the ground knocking him out Snails then screams "OH MY GOD SNIPS HOLD ON I'LL RUN AND GET HELP" Snails starts running with the camera to get away from Applejack however even with her damaged hoofs she catches up to Snips bucks him and he gets knocked down also dropping the camera the camera points to him lying on the ground unconscious Applejack put her mouth round his back hoof and starts dragging him away. Sunset Shimmer then puts the camera down she's horrified of what she just saw on that video she lights up her horn and starts looking around in every direction she then hear hoof steps behind her and she sees Applejack behind her Sunset Shimmer places a shield around her self with her magic. "Well well well" Applejack said "if it isn't the rich pony himself Filthy Rich". Sunset Shimmer was confused she had no clue what Applejack was on about it. Applejack grabbed a shovel and started approaching Sunset Shimmer. Sunset then shot the shield at Applejack knocking her over Applejack she then started running out trying to find her way out of the orchard Applejack started catching up to Sunset. Sunset Shimmer tried to teleport away but she couldn't concentrate on her magic while running Applejack was about to get Sunset Shimmer but before she could Sunset was able to do the teleport spell and got away she teleported outside of the orchard on the apple family's farm and started running all the way back to Pony Ville. Sunset Shimmer ran into twilights castle "Twilight Applejack has lost her mind she killed Bon Bon Snips Snails and nearly got me" Sunset said Twilight said "oh no I should of never gave her that potion what have I done" she then hugs Sunset Shimmer and tells her "I'm sorry I shouldn't of sent you out there I'm so glad your ok" Sunset hugged her back "it's okay Twilight right now we gonna find a way to stop Applejack from killing anymore ponies" Twilight said "your right Sunset I think I can make an antidote to the potion she drank " Sunset then asked "What potion did you give her exactly a one where she turns into a killer" Twilight said "no it was to keep her awake longer so that she can gather enough Apples for filthy rich but staying awake for so long has caused her to go crazy" Sunset Shimmer said "wait filthy rich she called me that when we were in the orchard" Twilight said "really oh no I guess she's so mad with him it's caused her to see him everywhere" Sunset then said "that makes sense I have heard ponies do hallucinate when they don't sleep for a long time" Twilight said "Yes that is true we have got to stop her before she kills another pony". We'll make an antidote and I'll give it to her Sunset you should go back to your world now you have done enough I'll take it from here Sunset said "Are you sure Twilight" Twilight said "yes I'm sure I was the reason this happened and I'm the one who should stop it" Sunset sighed "ok Sunset and Twilight hug each other Sunset said "Good luck and be safe". "Incase you don't make it back I just want to say thank you if it wasn't for you I would still be the meanest girl in my school you gave me the second chance I didn't deserve and I will never forget it" Twilight "your welcome Sunset every pony deserves a second chance and deserves to learn about friendship" Sunset went back into the mirror to her world while Twilight and Rainbow Dash went to give Applejack the antidote.