its been 12 hours since i publish my second crack at writing, and so far i love the results! 121 views, 10 likes and 5 dislikes later id say its pretty good for a first chapter
to those who liked it: thanks for the support you all give me the drive to keep at this
to those who disliked it: i will try harder to fix what ever you felt i did wrong if it can make the story better