2670525
Okay!

2670523
I suppose I'll give it a go.

Well okay you can shoot me a link. But first go to your story's main page and hit the "Edit" button. That will re-open all that information you entered when you first created it. On that page under 'Basic Information' there will be an section titled 'Unpublished view password'. Enter a simple password and hit save changes at the bottom. Then PM me the password and a link to your story. That password will let me see it for 24 hrs.

2670522
Thank you for the group! And it's completly up to you! I posted it just to get some feedback.

2670519
I would look it over myself but I'm pretty busy and I don't know how good I would be.

So I found a group for editors here, maybe one will be game:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors

And as for spelling and grammar the site and an online grammar checker could help with catching those errors.

But if you just want me to take a quick look at it I could and give my opinion on it.

2670515
I wanted to have Fluttershy hear about her backstory, so far it's turning out well, I just need someone to proofread it. Probably get suggestions as well as reactions