Check it out here!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32897/2/Of-Stars-and-Darkness/Chapter-2

Props to avorin for the major help!

He also gave me some ideas that I'm most likely going to use in future chapters.

Thanks dude! You rock!

I know I promised weekly updates, but I was busy for most of the past couple of weeks.

Don't worry, I'll get to writing the second chapter tomorrow.

So, I'm wondering how I should do this.

I want to work on my fic on a good schedule.

I'm unsure as to what kind of schedule though.

I definitely don't want to do what ChaoHarm does, you know, updates almost everyday. (I'M NOT A SADISTIC WRITER LIKE HIM)

So, I'm thinking about updating every beginning of the week.

Now, that could mean Sunday, Monday, or Tuesday.

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So, the first chapter of "Of Stars and Darkness" is going to be "fleshed out" this Saturday. (hopefully all goes well)

If you don't know what "fleshed out" means, it means getting expanded. As in, adding some more descriptive elements to it.

As all writers know, a piece of writing is never perfect.

(But they still try their best to make it perfect. lol)

So, sorry for the wait. It's the time me and the, "reviewer" I guess you could call him, decided upon.

IT SHALL BE HERE SOON!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32897/Of-Stars-and-Darkness

What do you think about it? I'm trying to get some friends online to look over it, one being ChaoHarm, but they aren't responding.

EDIT: My proofreader went through my first chapter and corrected the errors on it. (i.e. spelling/grammar)

But, I'm NOT going to post it yet.

Here's why:

It's lacking some descriptions.

I need to get someone to give me some tips on how to flesh it out a bit.

So, the wait continues...

I've decided to scratch my idea on that HiE sad fic. Too much of that going around, and the thing is, they're all pretty much the same except for some minor details, and I couldn't really think of any great details on it. (Which lead to MAJOR procrastination.)

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