here is a new ask a pony tumbler blog I made about rainbow dash running away from Equestria. it is supposed to be a sadfic type of Tumblr blog. and go ahead and ask some questions about her, and find out what was going to happen to her.

here is a link
https://broken-pegasus.tumblr.com/

My famfic has got negative feedback, from the readers it has got 2 likes and 9 dislikes. And with that i understand why.

The fic is not that good. The fic needs to be remastered.

I want to improve the fic, i really do.

And i need a poetic better co writer in order for this fic to be good. And i want marble pie (tje narrator of the fic) to be poetic in the story, like Dante Alighieri or Howard Phillips Lovecraft. I need help remastering this fic.

Don't worry guys someone actually did help me improve' and no he did not co write my stories he had send all the links to programs whare you can fix spelling mistakes.

I will not link all of them in his comment.

But I will link one of them.

https://www.polishmywriting.com

Thank you bad dragon for helping me out.

I seriously need some co writers to help me with my stories. And tests and that includes new content as well. I want to entertain people when writing a fanfic I really do. But considering the 1st negative comment I got, it's actually difficult. And yes it is critisism but that is not constructive.

I really need constructive critisism to help me with my stories. But if it's not constructive then it would be heard for me to continue making my content.

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