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I could help you with details if you want, if only under your permission that is. And also that is why I followed you.

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I can understand the disappointment to be honest. This was a rushed deal because I needed to meet a deadline. That and I’m still working on being really descriptive. Mainly because I suck ass with descriptions.

Thank you for the welcome though, and the warning. I do hope you’ll stick around for whenever I get the drive to write again. Any input is valid so long as ya not mean

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Hmm, interesting. But also, I've notice that all of those chapters are short, kinda makes me, now please don't take any offence to this....'Disappointed'. I've learned this when I was in your position, people on this website can be very judgmental people, (Including me, depends on my emotion tho). Now, please don't think that they are being mean, or ugly, because they are not. They look like they are, but actually they are giving you an opportunity to become more better. Now remember that I went though the same predicament and it ended up terribly. The only reason why I'm giving you this info, because I hate to see people fight over a stupid, grammar mistakes and other reasons. But other then that, welcome to Fimfiction.

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Basically my friend @ViolettaCamack on twitter hosted a writing competion. I was praised for my creative writing during school so I thought "why not"

After about a day of planning, 5 weeks of procrastinating and 6 hours of writing I made this. I wanted to go for a fun house of pure horror and everything written in this came off the top of my head.

Because your new, I would like to discuss a few things. One I saw your story and I'm kinda curious about how you did all this, since your new. Also If you need help, I'll happily applied.