Re-Construction! · 12:04am Jun 10th, 2012
So, i submitted Beyond Her Garden into EQD. The editor whom got back to me said that he/she loved the story line and that it had much potential. He/she also said that it needed to be revised, because the only two chapters posted seemed sloppy to them. This is true, i did rush the prologue (I didn't want people thinking about the prologue to much, so i didn't focus my time into it as much as i should have.) As for chapter 1, there were way less errors, but i did to much "she did this" and "he