So for my first story, without using Breach's old note anyway, I'm surprised at the number of comment and helpful critiscism I've received. 'Undecided' is also my true first pony based story(damn that Breach for getting me into it lol). Anyway I'm continuing the story and all. I'm making a reference to another story as well because I realized that it will open more doors alot more smoothly than my previous idea(reveal that Jacht accidentally murdered one of the Mane6's extended familty).

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Also "Nein spreken ze espanol" Hahaha, mixing langauges.
Any way I've fully revised chapter two, though I may or may not add more to other chapter and such.
Grr. Now that I've gone back once my head is swimming.
Anywho, I've got the revisions up and now I'm going to read throguh and look for speeling and gramer mistakes (hahaha)
Right then mates I'll give a holler when I've got it all fixed.

After getting some feedback I'll be going through the story Undecided and adding the semantics of two socially akward ponies chilling in a Library for two days. Hopefull it will sooth those who don't care much for the pacing(to be honest, when I went back and re-read the story I found I agree) So I'll fix that. Oh and there will be a few more rocky roads that Jecht and Twilight will find out about, and I plan on revealing Shining Armour's greatest failure.

I'm not going to let myself slip into a slump. Breach told me that in the face of a loss, you don't want to dwell. I'm already using note of his and making plans for his stories.

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I'm reading every story Breach made, and every he's referenced. I need to get a grasp on what is going on if I'm to continue his work. Might take me a while, that and the services I'll be going to.
I'll try to get back asap though.

Because I didn't quite understand how this site works. And probably because I didn't read the rules at 3 this morning and I had more pressing things going through my head, I had to resubmit my memorial of 'Breach' because of the lack of 'ponies'. I added ponies now, and it is my first time doing so. I just hope it doesn't sound stupid. Anyway the memorial story should pass now that it has ponies, just give it a couple hours or so.

So anyway, I haven't been able to sleep all night. I keep coming back to Breach's laptop. I actually found his notes for the continuation for 2 of his storires, and he asked me to end them so i guess thats my first project.

I"m saddened to be the one to say this. I do not know how to broach the subject per se, but my friend is no longer with you all. The man you knew as Breach passed today. He was the best friend I could have ever had, and he stayed storng for me throughout all my troubles since we were kids.
I wouldn't be doing this now if it wasn't for the note he'd asked his doctor to give me. He also wanted me to tell you all his story from my perspective.

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I get it, I have lots of spelling errors and stuff in my stories. It's not like I don't realize this you silly people. I use my PS3 as a computer. So i use the standard PS3 keyboard. It is very taxing and makes proofreading, finding, bringing up the keyboard and finding, and then fixing grammar mistakes quiete difficult. I'm soory, and I know it irks the shit out of some people but I can't do much else.

So I've decided to add Loyal's Dark side, Like NMM is to Luna. The only difference is that his 'dark side' is actually caused be something......wait for it....... self sacrificial.

I've got this interesting story in The Personal scene Dark Side part 1, which will be released before the end of the day.