Thanks! Your story is amazing! I've always kind of thought what it would be like to have really dark aspects in My Little Pony, with ideas like pony versions of my favorite Creepypasta characters (mainly Jeff, Eyeless Jack, Slenderman, and the proxies), and (of course) zombies! I like how you made the zombie ponies have eyes like King Sombra! That's something I definitely wouldn't have thought of.

Also, if you haven't checked it out already, I have also wrote my first story! It's called The New Friend (Part 1 of a 2 part story). Like I said, you should check it out.... if you have not already read it.

I also noticed that you said that you're an author. I'd like to become an author myself, so I chose to start practicing here!

1Oooo~! First post on your Userpage, huh? Hold on, I need to find something suitably epic...

Got one!

Thank you for adding my story to your Bookshelf. I hope you enjoy reading it even half as much as I enjoy writing it.

-Inkheart