So I submitted the fanfic to Equestria Daily and the lovely pre reader there gave a long, and very good response on what I can do to make the fanfic even better. So I've decided to rewrite the whole thing. I'll keep the current one up, but I'm gonna take it down nearing the time when the rewrite comes out.

A feel other fanfic writers may know is the feel that really, your story needs a LOT of work. I got that feel when Equestria Daily responded to my fanfic submission and basically said it needed a lot of work and the "Scootaloo is an orphan" bit is extremely cliché. I fully agree with that so I shall be taking it away from the fanfic. I shall also basically be keeping the story whilst redoing the ENTIRE fanfiction, so do not expect it to be finished anytime soon. I shall also be revoking the

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