2954543
Don't worry about it being harsh, everyone has their opinions.

Thanks for the feedback

2954488
Sure. First of all, I don't think cafeteria scene in the begining was nessesary. Walflower Blush asking for help with Math? It doesn't matter to the plot. Sunset could have just sit in the classroom or smth.
Secondly, the ending. "Your friends is your family" is nice statement to make. But Hair 6 appearing out of nowere, and each saying few lines, one after another? Feels like ripping off MLP FIM. Main 6 did that same thing a lot of times, espessialy in early seasons.
Your story is OK. It just didn't impress me. I was hoping to see something, i newer saw before, but alas!
I probably should up the rating to 6/10. I was too harsh.

Well, since apparently you offer explanations, may I ask about “Where Is My Daughter?”? I can expect that the grammar and shortness of it give it a low rating, but I'm more curious about the fact that my most popular work ends up being bad in some sense.

2821025
No, 7/10 Good. Was entertaining to read, but not moved my soul. Keep writing though)

So is being in both “decent” and “good” like a 6.5/10? Inquiring minds are inquisitive.

Either way, thanks for reading!