The following are comments on the first chapter of the explicit, Mature-rated story "Equestria's Pony Meat Business", by The Dark Ghost. They include spoilers and NSFW text. I was initially going to just post a regular comment; but what resulted seemed a bit long for that.
Edit from 2020: While the story was deleted from Fimfiction, it's available from Fimfetch, under story ID 177647.