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Thanks so much for the feedback. I try to make my stories' dialogue sound authentic (keyword being 'try').

and the fact that Twilight, RD and AJ got solo songs when the others didn't;

I know what you mean. I originally wanted songs for all of them, but I felt that clashed with how the story's plot progressed. I wanted it to flow naturally, rather than feel forced. Plus, scope creep can be a very serious problem, especially when dealing with a short meme fic.
In other news...

and good job with picking songs; aI didn't know half of them but they were all good

Welcome to the pony fandom. We has the musics.

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In terms of what I liked, I'd say that the choice of songs was good and the interactions between character felt very genuine

It did feel a little odd that no one seemed to comment on the fact that Discord's song was about fighting him rather than praising him, though
and the fact that Twilight, RD and AJ got solo songs when the others didn't; the tone throguh out was great so I think that's just the completionist in me talking

Thank you for adding Radio Troubles in Ponyville to your favorites.
What part(s) did you like best/think I could have improved?

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