I decided to try to take on board everything, and... My OC is now Apple Oak. He's an Earth Pony with no powers.

It feels like I'm giving up by doing this... But I want to see what the haters do if I do what they say.

Also I practiced writing emotions more.

I'm rewriting the story because I levelled my writing skill and my level. I beat trolls as my blog will show (it was fun) and saw more good shows, and now I know how to make my story better. I am ready for ROUND TWO! Also I changed Oak's personality to be less scared and weak and lame. I know he was scared but he's the hero, and he should be cool. But not perfect, which is why ponies react. And he has a new hat, making him not a recolour any more! But is he too different and turning off the

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http://neoshadowdragon6060.tumblr.com/

I also posted it to mugen fight guild. But not to deviantart. That site has too many trolls.

https://www.patreon.com/ShadowDragon60?ty=h&alert=2 Sorry about how hard it's been to find it. I should fix that now. I will.

I tried to practice putting in more emotions into my story, which my critics say I need to do. Also, my latest one was written because this site loves John Cena. I saw a fic with a ton of likes and barely any dislikes that had MLP's Changeling Wedding episodes, but with John Cena coming out of nowhere and beating Chrysalis in a fight. It was awesome! And it made me realize that I can admit how much I truly love John Cena without anyone thinking it's weird. I don't lick posters like the cartoon

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If you don't like OCs, don't even bother clicking on my stories. Any of them. I write OCs, many good writers write OCs, and not everyone hates them with a burning passion. Don't downvote without leaving a comment, don't downvote at all, just go back to your meaningless Random/Comedy oneshots in the feature box featuring canon characters.

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