What do you guys think of my story Revenge?

Here's the pic I'll use for my story

Hello. I just sent my story to my editor Mew Mew. He will edit it. I don't have much to say. This is my first story and it is one chapter. It is an OC story. Thank you. Goodbye.

I been up all night watching a new show called Star Vs the Forces of Evil. It's amazing. Go check it out. My story is almost done too. Goodbye.

Hey guys. I am writing an OC story with gore and stuff. Let me know if you have any ideas. It's called revenge and it should be out tomorrow. Please take a few min to read it. Thank you.

Hello. I am Golden Pheonix. I am new to fimfiction.