2160009 Yeah I've always been doing that since I began writing. It's kind of a habit but I'll try to do that from here on out.

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You really need to put a space between each sentence...start there.

2159615 I will in fact I have noticed quite a few errors in the new story which may delay it for a while but I promise it will come out fine.

I think you have potential, just gotta work out a few kinks with your writing. Anyway, keep practicing and pay close attention to grammar and construction and you'll do fine.

2159178 Cool! I can't wait!