With all forms of art there is a lot of freedom and possibilities. For the most part rules are set for beginners (like me) to help them improve until they reach the point they can freely throw off those training wheels. I myself am far from that point in any of my artistic pursuits but I occasionally pull a Kiaba and say screw the rules but there is two rules that I always follow in any story I conceive of and even think of putting to paper and that is never self insert and no Mary Sues.

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Currently working on the next chapter and getting all the major loose threads I need tied up before I open the can of worms.... wait if I tie up all my threads then how can I go fishing with the worms, that's very counterproductive.

So it should be done by tomorrow.

I am working on the next chapter and I will probably post it tomorrow before 2pm eastern standard time.

I kind of want to hear what you guys think the chapter will be about, don't worry I am not getting lazy I already have the outline done.

Well Subject one has been posted and so far it looks like alot of ponies are reading it, and hopefully enjoying it. I will try and continue my chapter a day (except when I have a test or something) pace at least a while, it really helps to give myself a tight deadline.

Also to all of you reading, I would really appreciate it if you would comment or rate the story, I really need some feedback to know if I am doing this right, and if I need to make any changes.