"Show, Don't Tell": the most common error in amateur fiction. · 5:30pm Dec 29th, 2014
I recently left a suggestion on Tala Tearjerker's first posted story. While there is quite the hullabaloo over her deleting comments (not a controversy I fully understand, to be honest), I have no doubt my comment will remain up. Nonetheless, I feel other new authors could benefit from my verbose suggestion, so I've included it below.