No problem. I joined fairly recently, and your story was one of the first that I picked up. It was a pretty fun read, my imagination actually got away from me at some point and started putting together a mental soundtrack from the show and PW games.
How is chapter two coming along? I read you were needing some help. I may not have much creative writing experience, but I am a stickler for grammer and could do some proofreading to help.

Thanks for the watch.