I have recently taken down several chapters. After some smug bastard ruined them somehow... on a second note that might been me on few drinks of scotch. Anyhow the fic still goes on, next chapter is ready when I get some things ironed out in it.

I'm just reading my own story a little here and I noticed something... I need a fucking proofreader. I must have forgotten what comas were and how to spell things properly.
Seriously! That be some crap at places man! So I'll will be doing that before I post the next chapter. That be chapter 18.