1809489 Well that sounds cool, I actually just finished chapter five so I will get to see these improvements soon enough when I have time to continue reading.
1809406 Thank you! I appreciate the suggestions to make my writing better - despite a huge dose of beginner's luck, this is only my first crack at this. Hopefully, I'll get better with more experience! Again, thank you for reading - how far along are you? I'll admit that the story gets much better after Chapter Five and then it improves again starting with Chapter Eleven. I acquired a very competent editor and wonderful prereaders... Thanks again!
Thanks for the fave on The Quest!
Thanks for the watch!
1809525 Please write any time I can address your concerns or answer your questions! And I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
1809489 Well that sounds cool, I actually just finished chapter five so I will get to see these improvements soon enough when I have time to continue reading.
1809406 Thank you! I appreciate the suggestions to make my writing better - despite a huge dose of beginner's luck, this is only my first crack at this. Hopefully, I'll get better with more experience! Again, thank you for reading - how far along are you? I'll admit that the story gets much better after Chapter Five and then it improves again starting with Chapter Eleven. I acquired a very competent editor and wonderful prereaders... Thanks again!